This is my interpretation...
Price Bridget, married, wife of a shipyard labourer 1857 November 13th
Bank St. Renton Cardoss f.20years
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Martin Kean shipyard labourer
H...Kean maiden name Price
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Child bed
No medical attendant
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from Church
David Gr...
as .... by
Stephen ...
....? family ground ???
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Martin Kean.. father..X his mark
....?
Robert.......??? registrar
witness
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1857 November 14th
P.t? Cardross
Robert .....
registrar
joan